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Old 21-07-2008, 03:29 PM   #51 (permalink)
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looking good so far, realy like the shovel on the side aswell. keep it up
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Old 21-07-2008, 05:06 PM   #52 (permalink)
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Thanks for your comments guys, that's kind of you if you see anything to criticize don't hesitate that could perhaps help me.

I worked on the torch but as a fool I didn't saved the first try So I redid it
Quite boring to do two times the same thing...

Some little things had been added aswell, minor things thought and don't pay attention to the tank and it's color at the moment, same with the meter, it's just to see what color I'm going to start with for my texture.

So, here the little update



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Old 22-07-2008, 08:05 AM   #53 (permalink)
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I´m loving it mate! all of these equipments on her backs and the googles, everything is coming out really nicely! I would just take another look at her body texture, would give it a more clear and clean look!
nevertheless! killer entry, keep it going
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Old 22-07-2008, 11:11 AM   #54 (permalink)
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Thanks for your comment Funk, I thought about that aswell but I was hesitating, you confirm what I had in mind, changing the body texture at the end...

I think so, I'm going to use a simple texture, just a simple color !
Thanks funk to give your opinion.
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Old 22-07-2008, 05:27 PM   #55 (permalink)
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looking good, i think revisiting your body is a good idea, at the mo the colour is drowning out your normal map quite a bit but otherwise theres some really nice texturing going on in your props. keep on bud
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Old 23-07-2008, 01:16 PM   #56 (permalink)
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Yes, I'll if I have enough time and If I don't slack too much I'll redo the body
I have some difficulties to finish that piece well, I'm a bit fed up, don't know why !
I hope I won't dash off that project too much...

In the meanwhile, I textured the tank, it's not so much nice but I'm satisfied, should I say, I try to be satisfied Still have to work on the meter... and others parts as you can see.



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Old 23-07-2008, 01:46 PM   #57 (permalink)
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Very nice model, I adore the glowing goggles!
By the way, just a thought. Why the shovel, if it has no hands? Nonetheless, it looks nice upon the beetle! I can't wait for the final image.
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Old 23-07-2008, 02:12 PM   #58 (permalink)
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haha nice point on the shovel Daxtor, but come on, she can be carrying this for the use of some other insect

dont have any major critics now, just the skin tone...
Baida, my favorite entry so far mate! keep going
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Old 23-07-2008, 02:35 PM   #59 (permalink)
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Very nice model, I adore the glowing goggles!
By the way, just a thought. Why the shovel, if it has no hands? Nonetheless, it looks nice upon the beetle! I can't wait for the final image.
Thanks that's really encouraging as I'm a bit fed up, it really pushs me to finish it even if I'm not really satisfied at the moment.

Thanks funk and Daxtor for the kinds words.
So, why a Shovel Daxtor !?

What would be a soldier whithout his shovel !? Nothing !
No, but to be serious as I stated at the beginning of this thread, I'haven't started from a concept art, which is quite a bad idea, because I didn't know exactly what I was looking for as final character.

So I started to put objects and the shovel came naturally as the torch and etc...
I know it's now really something real at all, but globally the character isn't real aswell.
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Old 23-07-2008, 03:02 PM   #60 (permalink)
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Thanks that's really encouraging as I'm a bit fed up, it really pushs me to finish it even if I'm not really satisfied at the moment.

Thanks funk and Daxtor for the kinds words.
So, why a Shovel Daxtor !?

What would be a soldier whithout his shovel !? Nothing !
No, but to be serious as I stated at the beginning of this thread, I'haven't started from a concept art, which is quite a bad idea, because I didn't know exactly what I was looking for as final character.

So I started to put objects and the shovel came naturally as the torch and etc...
I know it's now really something real at all, but globally the character isn't real aswell.
Haha, you got a good point about the soldier thing there! That is the reason why Axis is my favorite in DOD! Otherwise, Funkdelic got a good excuse if needed
Well I see, but you have come far without a concept art. I hope you will find the encouragement to finish this image
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