Competition #13 - DavidMcKenna

DavidMcKenna · 03-03-2008, 09:53 AM

Here are my concepts
The Mother ship

The Daughter attack ship

I am late getting started in this competition so I will need to work quickly.
Critique of my concepts is welcome, however because I am late getting started I am unlikely to change the concepts at this point (perhaps I will make the adjustment while I am modeling though.) I will however, keep all criticism in mind for future projects.

DavidMcKenna · 03-03-2008, 10:54 PM

I want to make sure I have the overall proportions correct before I start working on the details.

Here are the basic shapes blocked out

doylle · 03-04-2008, 01:00 AM

I realy like that second concept. The 3 arms are realy cool imo. The 7k limit might be a bit of a problem if you want all the detail, but i wish you the best of luck with it!

cheers

ColdRolled · 03-04-2008, 10:04 AM

pretty sweet concepts david. the second one reminds of the tracking bug from the first matrix, the one that is put in neo's stomach

fabiodan · 03-05-2008, 02:49 PM

This is it, i'm going home now.

Daelon · 03-06-2008, 02:59 AM

pretty interesting design, original...!

DavidMcKenna · 03-17-2008, 06:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ColdRolled

pretty sweet concepts david. the second one reminds of the tracking bug from the first matrix, the one that is put in neo's stomach

It wasn't intenchional, but now that you mention it, I see it too.

DavidMcKenna · 03-17-2008, 07:14 PM

Here are details for the body of the small daughter ship.

posed and surrounded with the general shapes for rest of the ship.

Here is the details for legs on the mother ship

doylle · 03-18-2008, 01:08 AM

Ooh, i like where this is going. Very nice details you have there

requiem2d · 03-18-2008, 07:20 PM

Very unique David! Nice work & welcome to the forums. I think you're putting yourself in a place where you're going to get extra points no matter what for getting some pretty good organic in there. Keep it up, looks very promising.

03-03-2008, 09:53 AM	#1 (permalink)
DavidMcKenna New Artist 15 - 0	Competition #13 - DavidMcKenna Here are my concepts The Mother ship The Daughter attack ship I am late getting started in this competition so I will need to work quickly. Critique of my concepts is welcome, however because I am late getting started I am unlikely to change the concepts at this point (perhaps I will make the adjustment while I am modeling though.) I will however, keep all criticism in mind for future projects. __________________ I learn from both my triumphs as well as my shortcomings, so comments and criticism in encouraged. http://www.mckenna3d.com

03-03-2008, 10:54 PM	#2 (permalink)
DavidMcKenna New Artist 15 - 0	I want to make sure I have the overall proportions correct before I start working on the details. Here are the basic shapes blocked out __________________ I learn from both my triumphs as well as my shortcomings, so comments and criticism in encouraged. http://www.mckenna3d.com

03-04-2008, 01:00 AM	#3 (permalink)
doylle Game-Artist.net Admin 2,391 - 345	I realy like that second concept. The 3 arms are realy cool imo. The 7k limit might be a bit of a problem if you want all the detail, but i wish you the best of luck with it! cheers __________________ Jeroenmaton.net - Scetchbook Thread - 3dsMax Viewport Shader - Ten Texturing Tips - Supports good crits -

03-04-2008, 10:04 AM	#4 (permalink)
ColdRolled Senior Artist 250 - 12	pretty sweet concepts david. the second one reminds of the tracking bug from the first matrix, the one that is put in neo's stomach __________________ "Life's tough, it's even tougher if you're stupid." -John Wayne

03-05-2008, 02:49 PM	#5 (permalink)
fabiodan Amateur Artist 676 - 64	This is it, i'm going home now. __________________

03-06-2008, 02:59 AM	#6 (permalink)
Daelon Amateur Artist 98 - 1	pretty interesting design, original...! __________________ Daelonik Online Portafolio

03-17-2008, 07:14 PM	#8 (permalink)
DavidMcKenna New Artist 15 - 0	Here are details for the body of the small daughter ship. posed and surrounded with the general shapes for rest of the ship. Here is the details for legs on the mother ship __________________ I learn from both my triumphs as well as my shortcomings, so comments and criticism in encouraged. http://www.mckenna3d.com

03-18-2008, 01:08 AM	#9 (permalink)
doylle Game-Artist.net Admin 2,391 - 345	Ooh, i like where this is going. Very nice details you have there __________________ Jeroenmaton.net - Scetchbook Thread - 3dsMax Viewport Shader - Ten Texturing Tips - Supports good crits -

03-18-2008, 07:20 PM	#10 (permalink)
requiem2d Game-Artist.Net Founder 2,208 - 309	Very unique David! Nice work & welcome to the forums. I think you're putting yourself in a place where you're going to get extra points no matter what for getting some pretty good organic in there. Keep it up, looks very promising. __________________

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