Competition #13 - Awiz

Awiz · 25-02-2008, 03:47 AM

Greetings to all!
It is my first post

I the big fanat of film Aliense and series of games Homeworld - accordingly in them I also searched inspiration

Here that at me it has turned out:

Masakari · 25-02-2008, 04:30 AM

Hi Awiz, welcome to the forum!

Yeah, i definitely see the Aliens Sulaco influence in there. What's the current polycount? I think you have some chamfers and small details in the antennas that you could take out to save some polies. I also see some clear triangulation here and there, dunno if thats intended or not, but it's causing some weird shadowing artifacts (rear hangar area, for example).
Maybe you could raise those "towers" in the middle top, so the silhouete gets a little more interesting and recognizable, creating some variation.

It's looking cool nonetheless, keep up the nice work!

ID Conceptart · 25-02-2008, 04:56 AM

Hi there Awiz and welcome!

The ship sure looks nice and I realy love the front of the ship.
Mabey you could use more like the "pins" (the ones you used at the front of the ship) that you used.
Like to see more soon

Awiz · 25-02-2008, 06:15 AM

Thanks for answers and remarks. NOW in model 4851 a triangle. It only wip and some details still can will change.

25-02-2008, 04:30 AM	#2 (permalink)
Masakari Freelancer 236 - 252	Hi Awiz, welcome to the forum! Yeah, i definitely see the Aliens Sulaco influence in there. What's the current polycount? I think you have some chamfers and small details in the antennas that you could take out to save some polies. I also see some clear triangulation here and there, dunno if thats intended or not, but it's causing some weird shadowing artifacts (rear hangar area, for example). Maybe you could raise those "towers" in the middle top, so the silhouete gets a little more interesting and recognizable, creating some variation. It's looking cool nonetheless, keep up the nice work! __________________ Unknown Robot - indie videogame developer Acetylene Games - High quality videogame screenshots My Portfolio :: artbymasa Tuts: HP / LP Modeling for Next-Gen Games WIP: Project Flashback Last edited by Masakari; 25-02-2008 at 04:34 AM.

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25-02-2008, 04:56 AM	#3 (permalink)
ID Conceptart New Member 29 - 0	Hi there Awiz and welcome! The ship sure looks nice and I realy love the front of the ship. Mabey you could use more like the "pins" (the ones you used at the front of the ship) that you used. Like to see more soon

25-02-2008, 06:15 AM	#4 (permalink)
Awiz New Member 4 - 4	Thanks for answers and remarks. NOW in model 4851 a triangle. It only wip and some details still can will change.