Competition #13 - Daelon

Daelon · 02-22-2008, 01:20 PM

Hi! I've been thinking about space designs and this is the result... Some concepts... very early, but I believe some of that can be useful...

I like Nautika design, but im not sure how to depurate it... I have to study the volume of the ship.

myles · 02-22-2008, 05:31 PM

The middle right one is really nice as a mothership and then the small top left one is good as the sister ship, really neat job

Daelon · 02-23-2008, 04:15 AM

haha, top left? the strange pseudo-creature?

Atius · 02-23-2008, 05:31 AM

the orion II mothership is real nice as a concept it has alot more defined lines and real nice shapes, i`d say it has alot of potential... as for the nautika 07 it has nice shapes too but the concept is a bit chaotic not very well drawn and it gives u a sense of not very clear image when u try to imagine as a 3d model.. but i gotta say theres some nice concepts there

Daelon · 02-23-2008, 12:07 PM

hey thnks for the comment, really I think you're right. Orion its easy to imagine as a volume, but Nautika.. Im thinking about that, I believe Nautika is more original, but the idea, as you say, its no clear...

Masakari · 02-24-2008, 04:55 AM

The Nautika definitely has the more interesting shapes,you should take that one and sketch a bit more, try to develop it a bit more, give it more detail.

ColdRolled · 02-24-2008, 09:36 PM

i like the nautika also..it has a big bad mothership feel to it

and already with the concept you have, it seems like it would be absolutely massive

retardedmonkey · 02-24-2008, 10:33 PM

I'd definitly say develop the Nautika some more. Unlike the orion, the Nautika doesn't really give a clear idea of what the other angles would look like. It does have some potential for some interesting shapes, even though they are fairly vague in the concept.

Personally I'd rethink the front a bit. I kind of like the lighter lines that you have on the front...the straighter ones.

My second choice would be for the Orion, as its a solid design. I'd say the Nautika has more potential to be unique though.

Daelon · 02-25-2008, 01:57 PM

thank for the comments. Finally I have decided to develop the Nautika mothership. here is it:

retardedmonkey · 02-25-2008, 02:05 PM

Yea! That's looking real good! Love the profile even more now that you've filled it in

02-22-2008, 01:20 PM	#1 (permalink)
Daelon Amateur Artist 98 - 1	Competition #13 - Daelon Hi! I've been thinking about space designs and this is the result... Some concepts... very early, but I believe some of that can be useful... I like Nautika design, but im not sure how to depurate it... I have to study the volume of the ship. __________________ Daelonik Online Portafolio

02-22-2008, 05:31 PM	#2 (permalink)
myles Teenage Artist 243 - 19	The middle right one is really nice as a mothership and then the small top left one is good as the sister ship, really neat job __________________ > Portfolio > Support Constructive Criticism Error: The operation completed successfully.

02-23-2008, 04:15 AM	#3 (permalink)
Daelon Amateur Artist 98 - 1	haha, top left? the strange pseudo-creature? __________________ Daelonik Online Portafolio

02-23-2008, 12:07 PM	#5 (permalink)
Daelon Amateur Artist 98 - 1	hey thnks for the comment, really I think you're right. Orion its easy to imagine as a volume, but Nautika.. Im thinking about that, I believe Nautika is more original, but the idea, as you say, its no clear... __________________ Daelonik Online Portafolio

02-24-2008, 04:55 AM	#6 (permalink)
Masakari Senior Artist 135 - 52	The Nautika definitely has the more interesting shapes,you should take that one and sketch a bit more, try to develop it a bit more, give it more detail. __________________ My Portfolio :: artbymasa Finished: Daedalus HK Drone \| Barrage Minigun \| Spikey bot Tutorials: Modeling HP / LP Models for Next-Gen Games

02-23-2008, 05:31 AM	#4 (permalink)
Atius Artist 91 - 4	the orion II mothership is real nice as a concept it has alot more defined lines and real nice shapes, i`d say it has alot of potential... as for the nautika 07 it has nice shapes too but the concept is a bit chaotic not very well drawn and it gives u a sense of not very clear image when u try to imagine as a 3d model.. but i gotta say theres some nice concepts there

02-24-2008, 09:36 PM	#7 (permalink)
ColdRolled Senior Artist 250 - 12	i like the nautika also..it has a big bad mothership feel to it and already with the concept you have, it seems like it would be absolutely massive __________________ "Life's tough, it's even tougher if you're stupid." -John Wayne

02-24-2008, 10:33 PM	#8 (permalink)
retardedmonkey Senior Artist 949 - 136	I'd definitly say develop the Nautika some more. Unlike the orion, the Nautika doesn't really give a clear idea of what the other angles would look like. It does have some potential for some interesting shapes, even though they are fairly vague in the concept. Personally I'd rethink the front a bit. I kind of like the lighter lines that you have on the front...the straighter ones. My second choice would be for the Orion, as its a solid design. I'd say the Nautika has more potential to be unique though. __________________ Portfolio

02-25-2008, 01:57 PM	#9 (permalink)
Daelon Amateur Artist 98 - 1	thank for the comments. Finally I have decided to develop the Nautika mothership. here is it: __________________ Daelonik Online Portafolio

02-25-2008, 02:05 PM	#10 (permalink)
retardedmonkey Senior Artist 949 - 136	Yea! That's looking real good! Love the profile even more now that you've filled it in __________________ Portfolio

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