Competition #13 - Daelon - Page 4

Masakari · 09-03-2008, 11:34 AM

Nice stuff Daelon, and congrats on finishing your entry!

I can see some stuff here and there that could have used more work (like the top front of the mothership, too low poly silhouette, or some of the leaking that is exagerated, i think the specular is a bit too strong in some parts, and quite a few artefacts in the normal map that you didn't clean), but i really like it, nice work man

nistrum · 13-03-2008, 08:41 AM

personally im having a hard time feeling the size of it there isnt much that gives it a "mothership" feel. you might want to add something in there to give it a scale something of a known scale. like windows or a bridge

requiem2d · 18-03-2008, 07:12 PM

Congrats on finishing

You have more than enough time to perfect your presentation, good luck!

TwiiK · 06-04-2008, 04:34 PM

I'll just post my gratulations now.

No offense to anyone, but if in3d doesn't texture his submission in the next 2 hours or someone else hijacks everything with an awesome scene then you seem to me like the definite winner.

The colors, contrast and highlights in your submission is very good. The modelling and use of the limited budget is good as well.

And you were even the first to finish - congrats!

Daelon · 07-04-2008, 02:52 AM

hey, thank you all for the comments

really I could improve my entry, but actually I'm tweaking my dominance war competition entry :P

09-03-2008, 11:34 AM	#31 (permalink)
Masakari Freelancer 236 - 252	Nice stuff Daelon, and congrats on finishing your entry! I can see some stuff here and there that could have used more work (like the top front of the mothership, too low poly silhouette, or some of the leaking that is exagerated, i think the specular is a bit too strong in some parts, and quite a few artefacts in the normal map that you didn't clean), but i really like it, nice work man __________________ Unknown Robot - indie videogame developer Acetylene Games - High quality videogame screenshots My Portfolio :: artbymasa Tuts: HP / LP Modeling for Next-Gen Games WIP: Project Flashback

18-03-2008, 07:12 PM	#33 (permalink)
requiem2d Senior Member 2,183 - 498	Congrats on finishing You have more than enough time to perfect your presentation, good luck! __________________

07-04-2008, 02:52 AM	#35 (permalink)
Daelon Amateur Artist 101 - 5	hey, thank you all for the comments really I could improve my entry, but actually I'm tweaking my dominance war competition entry :P __________________ Daelonik Online Portafolio

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13-03-2008, 08:41 AM	#32 (permalink)
nistrum Freelancer 450 - 71	personally im having a hard time feeling the size of it there isnt much that gives it a "mothership" feel. you might want to add something in there to give it a scale something of a known scale. like windows or a bridge

06-04-2008, 04:34 PM	#34 (permalink)
TwiiK New Member 34 - 11	I'll just post my gratulations now. No offense to anyone, but if in3d doesn't texture his submission in the next 2 hours or someone else hijacks everything with an awesome scene then you seem to me like the definite winner. The colors, contrast and highlights in your submission is very good. The modelling and use of the limited budget is good as well. And you were even the first to finish - congrats!