Competition #13 - naturon

naturon · 15-02-2008, 03:43 AM

Gday Gday,

Theres some great works happening in this comp already ... heres the start of my design.
It just a (VERY) general sketch to give me an idea of shape and size, its more born out of function than anything else ... so tell me what u think

Cheers

Sax

Atius · 15-02-2008, 04:19 AM

hmm... i gota say its original...tough i think it needs a little more details compared to the size of that, looking forward to see more

naturon · 16-02-2008, 06:57 PM

Yeah it is a bit low on the detail size but like i said it was really just to get an idea of how it'll look in my head.
Anyway after i getting a crap load of reference images ive started modelling. I wanted to go for a bit more of an Earthy/ humany feel ... sort of like an extended space station. So alot of the designs have come from rockets (specifically the V2) , satelites and Nuclear reactors.
Well heres what ive done so far ... only the rocket at the back has a normal map on it so far, just a test to see how itll look.
Crits welcome
Cheers

Sax

Atius · 17-02-2008, 03:50 AM

lol like someone used to say to me "very dark renders", can u try ataching more lights to the scene?

naturon · 17-02-2008, 05:06 AM

haha yeah it is a bit dark, i think my screen must have the brightness turned up or something ... try these thanx

doylle · 17-02-2008, 05:11 AM

They are still very dark

. Maybe if you add some lights to the scene?

You have an interesting desing, i like it, although i'd make the "solar dish" bigger, give it a bit of an surreal look. what's the current polycount btw?

UnsteadyTeddy · 17-02-2008, 11:56 AM

It's a nice design although I would try to make it more ship like. At the moment it looks too much like a prop/ orbiting station/ satellite than a ship.

17-02-2008, 05:11 AM	#6 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,375 - 4,398	They are still very dark . Maybe if you add some lights to the scene? You have an interesting desing, i like it, although i'd make the "solar dish" bigger, give it a bit of an surreal look. what's the current polycount btw? __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

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15-02-2008, 04:19 AM	#2 (permalink)
Atius Frequenter 93 - 6	hmm... i gota say its original...tough i think it needs a little more details compared to the size of that, looking forward to see more

17-02-2008, 03:50 AM	#4 (permalink)
Atius Frequenter 93 - 6	lol like someone used to say to me "very dark renders", can u try ataching more lights to the scene?

17-02-2008, 11:56 AM	#7 (permalink)
UnsteadyTeddy Senior Member 448 - 186	It's a nice design although I would try to make it more ship like. At the moment it looks too much like a prop/ orbiting station/ satellite than a ship.