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Old 10-02-2008, 05:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 10-02-2008, 05:08 PM   #2 (permalink)
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That sure was fast. Why dont you post it like the rest of us here?
Looking rather good.
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Old 10-02-2008, 05:09 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hey. looking good so far but keep this in the section for the comp, you can make your own topic there.

But good luck with it (I need to get started this week with more consepts etc, so much to do these past days).
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Old 10-02-2008, 05:29 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Coming along well, dude!

Moved this to competition forums

Could an admin with rights here fix the thread title? Cheers.
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Old 10-02-2008, 05:29 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i would say tone down the glow a bit. looks a bit like he was kicked off the set of bladerunner for having too much neon lighting.
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Old 10-02-2008, 06:50 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Erm, what about your polycount ?
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Old 10-02-2008, 07:09 PM   #7 (permalink)
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First and foremost - tight.

As for crits, I'd agree with Nistrum on the glow. First off, get a color scheme. I'd recommend 2 colors of glow max. Anything more looks like a carnival or Christmas Tree (the orange and the blue look really cool together, just get rid of the green and red ). Second, only glow stuff that needs to be glowed - I think you could easily get rid of half of it.

I'm interested in what you had in mind for the other ship, love it so far.
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Old 10-02-2008, 11:45 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Hey man, do what you feel is artsy, to me that looks really cool, and the fact that I've never seen anything like that, anywhere, makes it feel a lot more original. But I'll say this, balance out the glows a little bit, I like that it glows all over the place, however, there are areas where all the glowing lines are squeezed together. And some places are pretty dark...But thats all I can say...It's not like I can even produce something this awesome.....yet. ^_-
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Old 11-02-2008, 02:46 AM   #9 (permalink)
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This was somethign i put n my cg graveyard a long time ago. I put about 7hours into it what you see there and never touched it again. It is about 2250polies and that whole thign is on one 2048x2048. I love BladRunner and Tron so I though I would bring best of both worlds. That image only has a bs glow map I did and diffuse. No spec or normal/bum maps. I figuredthis contest would be a good place to ressurect it and finish it. The reason for the colors is because there is a base purple/magenta metal, think ghosts from halo, and it has a viral infections so it is giong evil with the black rough metal bleeding through with orange. The green you see is for the Jet/Fuel that is supposed to represent fuel i guess. Think cyberspace when you look at it. I know the idea is way out there, but I thin it is better than every other starwars/startrek rip u will see out there.
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Old 11-02-2008, 08:50 AM   #10 (permalink)
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As far as i understand, you can't use old work in the contest.

Other than that, it looks cool. I do agree with the others, use only one or two colors for the glow, otherwise it will look like a rainbow lol
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