Competition #13 - Armanguy - Page 2

ae. · 11-02-2008, 12:41 AM

update First Page!

doylle · 11-02-2008, 12:57 AM

Mothership looks good. side silhouete looks balanced, although i think the fron silhouete will need some more stuff...

The sistership needs more work, that's for sure. I'm sure you can do better than that...

UnsteadyTeddy · 11-02-2008, 03:34 AM

Nice concepts! The mothership looks great! I love the front and back! I just made a few crits that maybe would improve the concept imo.

1. I would make the front open so that the figheters would just fly in and out. Should look good with a nice glow map on it.
2. I thought it would look good with a the rear a bit wider, but i'm not sure now.
3. I would shorten the wing and spread the bottoms out wider.
4. You could try combining the wing into the engine/ body more. Maybe try moving the engines under the body of the fighter.

Good job!

Fleshen · 11-02-2008, 06:05 AM

Hey thats alot better, but now you make me look bad since noone understands the things i say ^^

11-02-2008, 12:41 AM	#11 (permalink)
ae. Level Artist 628 - 19	update First Page! __________________ aelevel.net Level Artist

11-02-2008, 12:57 AM	#12 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,375 - 4,398	Mothership looks good. side silhouete looks balanced, although i think the fron silhouete will need some more stuff... The sistership needs more work, that's for sure. I'm sure you can do better than that... __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

11-02-2008, 06:05 AM	#14 (permalink)
Fleshen Game Art Student 127 - 7	Hey thats alot better, but now you make me look bad since noone understands the things i say ^^ __________________ Computer games development - Graphics, 3rd year University of Skövde, Sweden

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