Competition #13 - sindwar

sindwar · 09-02-2008, 03:18 PM

Hi this is my concept for the fighter I wanted something airodynamic, hope you guys like it
Still some work to do on the mothership.

Tom · 09-02-2008, 03:27 PM

lovely. I am especially liking the side view. Looks like a updated apache - put into space. Looking forward to seeing it in 3D if you go with it.

sindwar · 10-02-2008, 11:21 AM

Here's a little update, the mothership is now also ready, because of the lack of detail i will problably add more details in the modeling process , also added some color.
Comments appreciated.

Snipergen · 10-02-2008, 11:23 AM

Nice drawing sindwar

only 1 remark on the mothership (if the top one is the mothership) I dont think it is big enough and it looks very like your fighter. You should scale it up alot and try a diffrent shape in my opinion

But damn, nice drawings.

Tom · 10-02-2008, 11:26 AM

really really cool concept I must say.
When I glanced at the mothership the first time I thought it was a smaller craft than your fighter, either a drone or scout.
Its mainly because nothing tells me that this ship is big I got confused.
I dont know if I should suggest windows or such things on the outer shell cause it looks pretty cool with a hard surface - so maybe a scetch from another angle where hangers or interior of some sorts are exposed would maybe help.

Xoliul · 10-02-2008, 11:29 AM

Agreed with Snipergen, the mothership really doesn't give you a sense of its scale.
Also, I think the top view of your fighter isn't a strong as the side profile. The bent and curved wings on the side don't work that good. Side view is one of the best I've seen here though.

sindwar · 10-02-2008, 11:37 AM

Yes indeed, there is a lack of detail that makes you believe it's the mothership.
But i will ad some more details like windows and little antennas to make it look big.

09-02-2008, 03:18 PM	#1 (permalink)
sindwar New Member 7 - 1	Competition #13 - sindwar Hi this is my concept for the fighter I wanted something airodynamic, hope you guys like it Still some work to do on the mothership.

10-02-2008, 11:23 AM	#4 (permalink)
Snipergen Senior Member 372 - 51	Nice drawing sindwar only 1 remark on the mothership (if the top one is the mothership) I dont think it is big enough and it looks very like your fighter. You should scale it up alot and try a diffrent shape in my opinion But damn, nice drawings. __________________ Portfolio: http://jeroendessaux.be

10-02-2008, 11:26 AM	#5 (permalink)
Tom Game Art Student 677 - 290	really really cool concept I must say. When I glanced at the mothership the first time I thought it was a smaller craft than your fighter, either a drone or scout. Its mainly because nothing tells me that this ship is big I got confused. I dont know if I should suggest windows or such things on the outer shell cause it looks pretty cool with a hard surface - so maybe a scetch from another angle where hangers or interior of some sorts are exposed would maybe help. __________________ "Without geometry, life is pointless."

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09-02-2008, 03:27 PM	#2 (permalink)
Tom Game Art Student 677 - 290	lovely. I am especially liking the side view. Looks like a updated apache - put into space. Looking forward to seeing it in 3D if you go with it.

10-02-2008, 11:21 AM	#3 (permalink)
sindwar New Member 7 - 1	Here's a little update, the mothership is now also ready, because of the lack of detail i will problably add more details in the modeling process , also added some color. Comments appreciated.

10-02-2008, 11:29 AM	#6 (permalink)
Xoliul Senior Member 930 - 283	Agreed with Snipergen, the mothership really doesn't give you a sense of its scale. Also, I think the top view of your fighter isn't a strong as the side profile. The bent and curved wings on the side don't work that good. Side view is one of the best I've seen here though.

10-02-2008, 11:37 AM	#7 (permalink)
sindwar New Member 7 - 1	Yes indeed, there is a lack of detail that makes you believe it's the mothership. But i will ad some more details like windows and little antennas to make it look big.