Competition #13 - Vincentez

Vincentez · 09-02-2008, 10:45 AM

Just getting started with the mothership here, trying some ideas..

requiem2d · 09-02-2008, 10:54 AM

Very awkward shape (or low-poly looking, especially the back tails). I would try defining it so that is has more of a flow to it, keep the side vents, should work out to be an advantage if you play it right. Right now, focus purely on the silhouette, then features & details. Keep it up...

Minotaur0 · 09-02-2008, 11:08 AM

Looks like a sistership to me

Vincentez · 09-02-2008, 11:46 AM

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Originally Posted by Minotaur0

Looks like a sistership to me

I was starting to think the same and I guess that's what it will be

Masakari · 12-02-2008, 04:57 PM

You need to work on the silhouette of the ship - those polygons are very noticeable atm. You can free a lot of polies by getting rid of all the stacked "side blades", which you can do via texture. Also, give it some volume, atm it looks really flat.

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Vincentez New Member 66 - 3	Competition #13 - Vincentez Just getting started with the mothership here, trying some ideas..

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requiem2d Senior Member 2,183 - 498	Very awkward shape (or low-poly looking, especially the back tails). I would try defining it so that is has more of a flow to it, keep the side vents, should work out to be an advantage if you play it right. Right now, focus purely on the silhouette, then features & details. Keep it up... __________________

09-02-2008, 11:08 AM	#3 (permalink)
Minotaur0 Senior Member 206 - 45	Looks like a sistership to me __________________ Thiago Klafke / Environment Artist Digital Portfolio

12-02-2008, 04:57 PM	#5 (permalink)
Masakari Freelancer 236 - 252	You need to work on the silhouette of the ship - those polygons are very noticeable atm. You can free a lot of polies by getting rid of all the stacked "side blades", which you can do via texture. Also, give it some volume, atm it looks really flat. __________________ Unknown Robot - indie videogame developer Acetylene Games - High quality videogame screenshots My Portfolio :: artbymasa Tuts: HP / LP Modeling for Next-Gen Games WIP: Project Flashback

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