Competition #13 - Enron

Enron · 09-02-2008, 09:57 AM

Just a quick start to my orbital city. Still thinking through the layout and trying to figure out to myself which details I want to model or let the normal map handle.

requiem2d · 09-02-2008, 10:58 AM

This is purely my opinion, but I feel as if the judges will have a hard time identifying this as the mother ship or feeling the "forward motion" that is usually felt in a mothership. You could keep the concept, but give it more of an oval shape and some sort of mechanisms that look like motors, thrusters, etc. As I've mentioned in another post, work on your silhouette before getting too deep. Keep it up..

Corsair970 · 09-02-2008, 12:54 PM

Perhaps you could make it like that Halo city-ship thing High charity I think, add a swirling vortex to propel it to the bottom or something, The idea's great but like many good out of the box ideas, they're almost out of the competition too... Ya I felt like I could say something witty but I think it came out stupid...

09-02-2008, 09:57 AM	#1 (permalink)
Enron New Member 11 - 1	Competition #13 - Enron Just a quick start to my orbital city. Still thinking through the layout and trying to figure out to myself which details I want to model or let the normal map handle.

09-02-2008, 10:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
requiem2d Senior Member 2,183 - 498	This is purely my opinion, but I feel as if the judges will have a hard time identifying this as the mother ship or feeling the "forward motion" that is usually felt in a mothership. You could keep the concept, but give it more of an oval shape and some sort of mechanisms that look like motors, thrusters, etc. As I've mentioned in another post, work on your silhouette before getting too deep. Keep it up.. __________________

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09-02-2008, 12:54 PM	#3 (permalink)
Corsair970 Senior Member 151 - 9	Perhaps you could make it like that Halo city-ship thing High charity I think, add a swirling vortex to propel it to the bottom or something, The idea's great but like many good out of the box ideas, they're almost out of the competition too... Ya I felt like I could say something witty but I think it came out stupid...