Competition #13 - Snipergen

[FaN]

Originally Posted by Z-trooper

Its actually starting to remind me of a little eager dog or cat. I can just imagine those engines as paws

What he said exactly

Can't wait to see the texturing ;D

[doylle]

Can we see a wireframe render? don't have any real crits so far, all looks fine to me.

I wouldn't use the bottom plate though. it think it looks to much like a ground vehicle rather than a space ship. i realy like this pose tbh...

[Snipergen]

Sure mate, thx for the comments!!

[doylle]

The shape looks more or les ok, but i'd change the poly distribution somewhat if i was you. Above the round thing, where the engine is attached, there are 3 or 4 edges very close to eachother, don't think they serve a meaningfull purpose. I'd reuse those on the engine blocks, to make them look smoother...

[BloodRobot]

Yo Snipergen...
This is the first I've seen of your post and I have to say looks great. The concept reminds me of a leaping frog, if you know what I mean. As far as the model, I think there are a few places to clean up. As Doylle said, the round parts above the engines. Also the lip under the main body looks like it has a little funky thing goin on there. The front engines are slightly different from the back, and I can see they need to fold up differently, but I would suggest making them the same, only backwards of course, seeing how they fold up. I would like to see a little more detail in the engines also, if you can spare the polys. Maybe a defined lip toward the thruster ends. Dude, this concept is freaking awesome in my opinion, and I can really feel this going somewhere if you take the time to flesh out the model! The design and mechanics really stand out in this piece. Look forward to where you go from heere, keep it up man, I'm rooting for ya!

[Tom]

Hey dude, find time to finish this would be a shame if that little fulcrum there didnt make it :P