Competition #12 - Wessx

wessx · 14-10-2007, 05:08 AM

This is my entry for the contest. I made some sort of modern phonecell where you can call, internet, use credit card etc... here are the wires any comments tips or idea's are welcome!

good luck!

wessx

fabiodan · 14-10-2007, 05:32 AM

the screens look odd... you'd expect that in the future, the aspect ratio would be 16 to 9 at least, but square displays? but if it's your style then who am i to disagree. one's art can't be influenced.
you're using too much triangles on the cylinder-ish thing on top of the screens, consider having it textured in. also your ground plane could use a bit optimization maybe?

doylle · 15-10-2007, 02:33 AM

looks like an interesting concept, but keep in mind that you can't use 2 sided textures. The "shield" looks realy thing. It could be nice if you want a holographic effect, but if you're goinf for glass or plastic, i'dd realy add some thickness to it...

wessx · 15-10-2007, 09:34 AM

--"the screens look odd.. the aspect ratio would be 16 to 9 at least "
Your totally right i haven't thought about that one at all!

--"but keep in mind that you can't use 2 sided textures"
I should change it then your it's two sided texture right now, a holographic effect is also a good idea!

thanks both for the feedback!
wessx

14-10-2007, 05:08 AM	#1 (permalink)
wessx New Member 26 - 1	Competition #12 - Wessx This is my entry for the contest. I made some sort of modern phonecell where you can call, internet, use credit card etc... here are the wires any comments tips or idea's are welcome! good luck! wessx

14-10-2007, 05:32 AM	#2 (permalink)
fabiodan Game Art Student 925 - 127	the screens look odd... you'd expect that in the future, the aspect ratio would be 16 to 9 at least, but square displays? but if it's your style then who am i to disagree. one's art can't be influenced. you're using too much triangles on the cylinder-ish thing on top of the screens, consider having it textured in. also your ground plane could use a bit optimization maybe? __________________

15-10-2007, 02:33 AM	#3 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,375 - 4,397	looks like an interesting concept, but keep in mind that you can't use 2 sided textures. The "shield" looks realy thing. It could be nice if you want a holographic effect, but if you're goinf for glass or plastic, i'dd realy add some thickness to it... __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

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15-10-2007, 09:34 AM	#4 (permalink)
wessx New Member 26 - 1	--"the screens look odd.. the aspect ratio would be 16 to 9 at least " Your totally right i haven't thought about that one at all! --"but keep in mind that you can't use 2 sided textures" I should change it then your it's two sided texture right now, a holographic effect is also a good idea! thanks both for the feedback! wessx