Competition #12 - sgv3dmax

sgv3dmax · 25-09-2007, 10:43 PM

I am reserving my space here. Thought i will go for a waste bin which would hold plastic waste. Comments and crits welcome.

farzan · 25-09-2007, 11:57 PM

cool, well i don't really have much C&C for you right now, but will look forward to seeing more, try posting wire frame as you keep progressing and that would help in giving C&Cs.

cheers

Mr.Senator · 26-09-2007, 03:32 AM

I agree, a wireframs and a polycount would be great. Since we have 1000 tris to use, it would be nice to see where you used polys so we can maybe help you see where you can reduce polys or add polys

looking good though so far!

- Zach

sgv3dmax · 26-09-2007, 06:26 AM

Yeah, i will add the WF with tricount once i get back home.

fabiodan · 27-09-2007, 01:20 AM

the hole in the left "wall" looks weird, and also there's a problem with your shading: you should set the bottom plane to a different smoothing group or else it will affect the correct lighting of the left "wall(?)"

you should also chamfer the edges along the corners if you'd like some more quality into the model and still have a sufficient triangle count left to do it. good luck, hope i was of some help!

sgv3dmax · 27-09-2007, 02:47 AM

Yeah, the smoothing groups were causing problem. I have rectified it. The hole on the left wall was too much to the inside. I have made it shorter this time. Currently, the triangle count is 594. I am planing to add some garbage in and around the bin. I will chamfer the corners after these are made so that i will have a fair idea about the triangles left.

sgv3dmax · 28-09-2007, 01:56 AM

This time i added a sack inside the bin and some debris on the floor. The wall and floor will be same. I think about adding a fence at the rear if tricount permits.

farzan · 28-09-2007, 02:11 AM

well as far as fence goes, how about making it wooden and all around it, back and sides i mean. the fence is roughly close to each side.
cheers

Pankake · 28-09-2007, 05:06 AM

I don't think the scenery counts as a part of the prop, so you might be able to add all you like back there, don't quote me on that, though, I could be wrong. Would a moderator care to chime in?

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requiem2d · 28-09-2007, 06:37 AM

A single piece would indicate that it needs to be attached to the main body, so if you lean garbage bags against it, it would be fine but this is too free floating. Hope this clarifies. Cheers

25-09-2007, 10:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
sgv3dmax Senior Member 387 - 25	Competition #12 - sgv3dmax I am reserving my space here. Thought i will go for a waste bin which would hold plastic waste. Comments and crits welcome. __________________ 3D Artist - Gameloft - Toronto my online portfolio VANARTS Unearthly challenge page - scroll down to middle

25-09-2007, 11:57 PM	#2 (permalink)
farzan Freelancer 100 - 5	cool, well i don't really have much C&C for you right now, but will look forward to seeing more, try posting wire frame as you keep progressing and that would help in giving C&Cs. cheers __________________ Ali Bordbar - Farzan \| Environment Artist \| Free Lancer \| SKYPE: farzanb \| Portfolio 3dsMax \| Mental Ray \| PhotoShop \| Unreal Editor \| Mud Box \| Unity3d \| Maya Supporter of good crits

26-09-2007, 03:32 AM	#3 (permalink)
Mr.Senator Industry Artist 74 - 17	I agree, a wireframs and a polycount would be great. Since we have 1000 tris to use, it would be nice to see where you used polys so we can maybe help you see where you can reduce polys or add polys looking good though so far! - Zach __________________ www.seventhfaction.com

26-09-2007, 06:26 AM	#4 (permalink)
sgv3dmax Senior Member 387 - 25	Yeah, i will add the WF with tricount once i get back home. __________________ 3D Artist - Gameloft - Toronto my online portfolio VANARTS Unearthly challenge page - scroll down to middle

27-09-2007, 01:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
fabiodan Game Art Student 925 - 127	the hole in the left "wall" looks weird, and also there's a problem with your shading: you should set the bottom plane to a different smoothing group or else it will affect the correct lighting of the left "wall(?)" you should also chamfer the edges along the corners if you'd like some more quality into the model and still have a sufficient triangle count left to do it. good luck, hope i was of some help! __________________

27-09-2007, 02:47 AM	#6 (permalink)
sgv3dmax Senior Member 387 - 25	Yeah, the smoothing groups were causing problem. I have rectified it. The hole on the left wall was too much to the inside. I have made it shorter this time. Currently, the triangle count is 594. I am planing to add some garbage in and around the bin. I will chamfer the corners after these are made so that i will have a fair idea about the triangles left. __________________ 3D Artist - Gameloft - Toronto my online portfolio VANARTS Unearthly challenge page - scroll down to middle Last edited by sgv3dmax; 27-09-2007 at 02:50 AM.

28-09-2007, 01:56 AM	#7 (permalink)
sgv3dmax Senior Member 387 - 25	This time i added a sack inside the bin and some debris on the floor. The wall and floor will be same. I think about adding a fence at the rear if tricount permits. __________________ 3D Artist - Gameloft - Toronto my online portfolio VANARTS Unearthly challenge page - scroll down to middle Last edited by sgv3dmax; 28-09-2007 at 02:03 AM.

28-09-2007, 02:11 AM	#8 (permalink)
farzan Freelancer 100 - 5	well as far as fence goes, how about making it wooden and all around it, back and sides i mean. the fence is roughly close to each side. cheers __________________ Ali Bordbar - Farzan \| Environment Artist \| Free Lancer \| SKYPE: farzanb \| Portfolio 3dsMax \| Mental Ray \| PhotoShop \| Unreal Editor \| Mud Box \| Unity3d \| Maya Supporter of good crits

28-09-2007, 05:06 AM	#9 (permalink)
Pankake Senior Member 1,734 - 461	I don't think the scenery counts as a part of the prop, so you might be able to add all you like back there, don't quote me on that, though, I could be wrong. Would a moderator care to chime in? . __________________ Good Crit! Aaron Clifford London, UK Sketchbook thread Aaron Clifford Portfolio

28-09-2007, 06:37 AM	#10 (permalink)
requiem2d Senior Member 2,183 - 498	A single piece would indicate that it needs to be attached to the main body, so if you lean garbage bags against it, it would be fine but this is too free floating. Hope this clarifies. Cheers __________________

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