Competition #12 - seir

[seir]

The bench is a good idea but I haven't got in my vision and I've never seen any benches on bus stops

I had 508 poly / 1000 tris but I've replaced some details, added newspaper and and I'm looking for a place on the texture for that newspaper Maybe today I'll finish normal map and star with the environment

[Blunkka]

Looking good man, although you got the wrong community poster there

[seir]

[BloodRobot]

Seir: Looking good man. My crit would be that there needs to be more of a distinction between the materials. The wood boards look good, but the roof looks like more bent plywood and not metal. Maybe darken the metal parts or add a spec map or a coat of paint. I really like this piece so far. Forgive me if all this is made of wood, that would make more sense cause you wouldn't nail wood boards to metal. Anyhow, GL!!!

[requiem2d]

I agree, spec it up a bit. I'd also make the poster a different color than the graffiti on top of the glass, this way one can tell the difference. Keep it up (& render on something diff then white )

[DaveW]

Mapcore ftw
I agree, it'll look better with spec maps and all that shader stuff (or if it's already there, increase it a a bit). Although I don't think there's a real issue with material distinction.

[farzan]

perhaps what would make the distinction from metal and wood, would be if you made the top metal a little rusty and darker, make it be a bus stop thats been too old and under the rain so long that even the paint couldn't with stand the bad weather .

[seir]

Yes, I will change a roof texture to something else mor metal-like and also rust is very welcome