Competition #11 - HapaNinja

hapaninja · 16-08-2007, 10:28 AM

Howdy, started texturing this, still need to do some cleanup work on the model though. C&Cs welcome!

Minotaur0 · 16-08-2007, 10:53 AM

There's an obvious UVW issue on the lower roof side faces. They also are in the same smoothing group as the top face... other that it looks like a nice start.

TychoCelchuuu · 16-08-2007, 11:38 AM

The two low, sloping roofs look kind of weird. They don't look like the roof of a building, but more like a piece of metal from a gun or a crate or something. I'd break it up in to more panels or something.

doylle · 17-08-2007, 12:12 AM

I would definitly finish the modeling before starting the texture. Maybe you can save tris, and add extra stuff...

As for the texture, it looks like a good start, but, I think "Reusing textures space" will be the punch line here. You have 5 structures on the roof that are almost identical. It looks like you unwrapped them all. But it think that 1, maybe 2 would do the trick. With some smart mirroring you can make em look "random", and save alot of texture space...

16-08-2007, 10:53 AM	#2 (permalink)
Minotaur0 Senior Member 206 - 45	There's an obvious UVW issue on the lower roof side faces. They also are in the same smoothing group as the top face... other that it looks like a nice start. __________________ Thiago Klafke / Environment Artist Digital Portfolio

17-08-2007, 12:12 AM	#4 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,375 - 4,397	I would definitly finish the modeling before starting the texture. Maybe you can save tris, and add extra stuff... As for the texture, it looks like a good start, but, I think "Reusing textures space" will be the punch line here. You have 5 structures on the roof that are almost identical. It looks like you unwrapped them all. But it think that 1, maybe 2 would do the trick. With some smart mirroring you can make em look "random", and save alot of texture space... __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

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16-08-2007, 11:38 AM	#3 (permalink)
TychoCelchuuu Senior Member 294 - 30	The two low, sloping roofs look kind of weird. They don't look like the roof of a building, but more like a piece of metal from a gun or a crate or something. I'd break it up in to more panels or something.