Competition #11 - UnsteadyTeddy

UnsteadyTeddy · 13-08-2007, 01:37 PM

I am going to make a storage/ production facility in a modern and industrial style. A few crappy sketches but i've got some solid refs to work from. That's all for now.

UnsteadyTeddy · 13-08-2007, 07:24 PM

Blocking in the major details at the moment. Probably going to have to cut down a lot of polies on the silo's for all the details I have in mind ( currently 1033 tris ).
Let me know what you think about the general design, thanks.

ZASkaggs · 14-08-2007, 01:14 AM

The shape looks interesting, but what's that in the foreground? It's hard for me to tell at this point. Is it a depression in the ground?

UnsteadyTeddy · 14-08-2007, 08:21 AM

Yep, all will become clear my friend, all will become clear ...

UnsteadyTeddy · 23-08-2007, 06:41 PM

Finished the modelling stage. Currently at 1468 tris.
Hopefully you can make out what it would do and how it would work, a mining/ resource facility.
The plane going around the viewing platform is going to be an alpha'd rail.

Veko · 23-08-2007, 06:51 PM

looks cool

requiem2d · 23-08-2007, 06:55 PM

I like the theme a lot, I'm thinking you can do the rails with a normal map and just have a plain on the ground (with alpha). Would allow you do detail the cylinders, factory roof or crane some more. Keep it up bud...

doylle · 24-08-2007, 01:04 AM

solid work man, i realy like the theme and stlye. Maybe add a plain on the bottom of the crane (even if it was only temporarily) to fix the AO problem...

weasel.acuh5o · 24-08-2007, 02:58 AM

nice idea, haven't seen this before. I agree with requiem on the tracks, it'd be better to do them with a normal, would give you a smoother result and allow you to detail the roof a bit more. maybe slanting it a bit, putting some windows in it would be a good...

UnsteadyTeddy · 24-08-2007, 04:37 AM

requiem - I never thought about making the tracks with a normal map. Thats a good suggestion and it should free up enough tris for me to make a decent-ish truck for carting away the resources.

doylle - Nice tip for the AO, thanks!

Next update won't be until I start butchering this thing with my texturing ( lack of ) skils.

14-08-2007, 01:14 AM	#3 (permalink)
ZASkaggs Amateur 116 - 6	The shape looks interesting, but what's that in the foreground? It's hard for me to tell at this point. Is it a depression in the ground? __________________ ->My Portfolio ->My Current Work

23-08-2007, 06:55 PM	#7 (permalink)
requiem2d Senior Member 2,183 - 460	I like the theme a lot, I'm thinking you can do the rails with a normal map and just have a plain on the ground (with alpha). Would allow you do detail the cylinders, factory roof or crane some more. Keep it up bud... __________________

24-08-2007, 01:04 AM	#8 (permalink)
doylle Industry Artist 3,373 - 3,720	solid work man, i realy like the theme and stlye. Maybe add a plain on the bottom of the crane (even if it was only temporarily) to fix the AO problem... __________________ Environment artist - EA dice JeroenMaton.net Sketchbook

24-08-2007, 02:58 AM	#9 (permalink)
weasel.acuh5o Industry Artist 394 - 398	nice idea, haven't seen this before. I agree with requiem on the tracks, it'd be better to do them with a normal, would give you a smoother result and allow you to detail the roof a bit more. maybe slanting it a bit, putting some windows in it would be a good... __________________ Supporter of Constructive Criticism

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13-08-2007, 07:24 PM	#2 (permalink)
UnsteadyTeddy Senior Member 448 - 177	Blocking in the major details at the moment. Probably going to have to cut down a lot of polies on the silo's for all the details I have in mind ( currently 1033 tris ). Let me know what you think about the general design, thanks.

14-08-2007, 08:21 AM	#4 (permalink)
UnsteadyTeddy Senior Member 448 - 177	Yep, all will become clear my friend, all will become clear ...

23-08-2007, 06:41 PM	#5 (permalink)
UnsteadyTeddy Senior Member 448 - 177	Finished the modelling stage. Currently at 1468 tris. Hopefully you can make out what it would do and how it would work, a mining/ resource facility. The plane going around the viewing platform is going to be an alpha'd rail.

23-08-2007, 06:51 PM	#6 (permalink)
Veko New Member 19 - 0	looks cool

24-08-2007, 04:37 AM	#10 (permalink)
UnsteadyTeddy Senior Member 448 - 177	requiem - I never thought about making the tracks with a normal map. Thats a good suggestion and it should free up enough tris for me to make a decent-ish truck for carting away the resources. doylle - Nice tip for the AO, thanks! Next update won't be until I start butchering this thing with my texturing ( lack of ) skils.

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