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Old 09-08-2007, 02:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Competition #11- Hilm

Ok well i'm gonna do a power generating plant type thing.

Heres the WIP so far.

Lemme know what you think so far.
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Old 09-08-2007, 08:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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its look too sloped to me, it doesnt look like a building. my suggestion would be to add sections (more boxed approach) to the building instead of the slope, or crease the slope more.

i like the idea and im looking forward to se where you take it
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Old 10-08-2007, 10:51 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the design, lots of RTS buildings are exaggerated like that since if you tried to make everything realistic when they only stretch half an inch across the screen they all end up looking too similar. Can't wait to see where you go with it.
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Old 10-08-2007, 11:13 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I like the design, lots of RTS buildings are exaggerated like that since if you tried to make everything realistic when they only stretch half an inch across the screen they all end up looking too similar. Can't wait to see where you go with it.

Lol thanks . Just made it up as I went allong hehe.

Anyway heres a quick update! Gonna have to optimise a bit as I think i'm just over the tri limit atm :S.
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Old 10-08-2007, 11:26 AM   #5 (permalink)
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It looks like what it is, so good job. Reminds me of those gas refineries in Starcraft a bit.
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Old 10-08-2007, 12:38 PM   #6 (permalink)
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not much to crit here, except those cooling towers.
to me they look kinda weird now coz of the pipes on top going into the tower
and those towers usually have a big air intake at the base ( see what i mean)

looking forward to see this textured.
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