Competition #10 - Rawk777

[Rawk777]

Hi everyone,

This is my first comp here .

Here is the concept I made, and my first WIP of it.

[bb0x]

dont i know you? lol

Ahah anyways... Is that a red cross in that "box" or is that ment to be "light". If it is ment to be light, I would have done it the other way around from slim to wide.

I would make the cross on the outside of the box bolder so you can see it better from further distances.

I like the crosses on the 4 corners, but if it was to be real life I can imagine myself going face down because I'm not watching out and am desperate to gain health lol.

And do add detail with the remainig triangles

[Rawk777]

[quote=bb0x;24715]dont i know you? lol

I like the crosses on the 4 corners, but if it was to be real life I can imagine myself going face down because I'm not watching out and am desperate to gain health lol.
[quote]

Yeah, from 3dt, I guess you remember, lol.

You're right for the crosses on the corners. I should call it health trap . I'll see if I leave them or not.

Thanks for the comments, I'll fix the lights comming from the sides.

[Rawk777]

Update!

This is the subdivided model.

The base model is now at 1200 tris.

Any suggestion before I unwrap ?

[bb0x]

i dont thik the yellow light coming from the crosses on the corners would go that diretion... i'd make them go allong with what way the surface is pointing at. and i dont think alight that small would go that far.... unless it is REALLY bright.

[tkaza]

The light beams if that’s what they are seem to long and theres a bit you could optimize to add more detail.
Also a really nice high poly normal map would make the model allot more attractive, bring out some detail and make it feel like something that was made to last.

[Rawk777]

Thank you for the comments Bbox and Tkaza. For the moment, I decided to put those light beams off to focus on the modeling of the item itself.

I optimized the low-poly version, and I'll post it later. Here is what I have so far with the hi-poly version. I think I still have work to do on it. Any suggestions?

It's the first time I model a hi-poly model to bake it to a low-poly one. I already did a few tutorials, but any help woulb be greatly apreciated

[tkaza]

Thats what im talking about, looking great dude

[BloodRobot]

This things screams.."You will be fully healed if you grab me!". Like the concept.

[Rawk777]

Update! The normal map is on, and I have 946 triangles.

I will have to find a place for the lights in the map, because right now its only a gradient, and the uv is not on the map yet.

Someone knows where I can find a good tutorial about how to make those lights rays?

The texture is not already done, its just materials yet.