Competition #10 - Mist - Page 2

StefanH · 25-06-2007, 08:18 AM

very very sweet design :thumbsup:

Mist · 27-06-2007, 12:50 PM

Done the high poly mesh apart from the heart. crits welcome

Jimmayy · 27-06-2007, 08:06 PM

Can we look at some wires too?

benclark · 27-06-2007, 08:22 PM

the main crit I have is the join where the pipe meets the canister. Its kinda blobbly and could easily be fixed up with a bit of pinch brush action in Zbrush or Mudbox. I like the tape though, a nice touch

master_f · 30-06-2007, 04:56 AM

wow, looks good, the tape kinda looks real :O, the way it folds is real

i like ure idea ^^

Mist · 12-07-2007, 06:56 PM

update. Its been a while and I havnt been able to work on it as much as I'd liked to.

started textureing, wasnt too happy to start with but its getting better. Not sure how i can make the lid (top part attached to the pipe) more interesting, also I dont like the writing on the battery. Crits welcome.

Mist · 15-07-2007, 01:23 PM

Ended up pretty much the way I wanted it, except I wish the specular was a bit brighter, but i cant change anything now as im not at my computer. there are bubbles coming from the heart but its not that obvious in the animation. Its ment to be a pickup for a gritty survival horror game which is why it isn't like a glaringly obvious arcady pickup. This my 1st attempt at the low poly comp and im pretty pleased with it. I'll up the specular for my portfolio.

great comp with some seriously cool models

Beauty render:

Beauty Animation (avi)

http://www.nic.sarahparsons.co.uk/fo...althpickup.avi

diffuse map

wire frame

normal map

specular map

alpha map

27-06-2007, 08:22 PM	#14 (permalink)
benclark Industry Artist 2,317 - 531	the main crit I have is the join where the pipe meets the canister. Its kinda blobbly and could easily be fixed up with a bit of pinch brush action in Zbrush or Mudbox. I like the tape though, a nice touch __________________ www.benjaminclark.net My Sketchbook

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25-06-2007, 08:18 AM	#11 (permalink)
StefanH Senior Member 215 - 30	very very sweet design :thumbsup:

27-06-2007, 12:50 PM	#12 (permalink)
Mist Senior Member 356 - 64	Done the high poly mesh apart from the heart. crits welcome

27-06-2007, 08:06 PM	#13 (permalink)
Jimmayy New Member 10 - 1	Can we look at some wires too?

30-06-2007, 04:56 AM	#15 (permalink)
master_f Senior Member 284 - 36	wow, looks good, the tape kinda looks real :O, the way it folds is real i like ure idea ^^

12-07-2007, 06:56 PM	#16 (permalink)
Mist Senior Member 356 - 64	update. Its been a while and I havnt been able to work on it as much as I'd liked to. started textureing, wasnt too happy to start with but its getting better. Not sure how i can make the lid (top part attached to the pipe) more interesting, also I dont like the writing on the battery. Crits welcome.

15-07-2007, 01:23 PM	#17 (permalink)
Mist Senior Member 356 - 64	Ended up pretty much the way I wanted it, except I wish the specular was a bit brighter, but i cant change anything now as im not at my computer. there are bubbles coming from the heart but its not that obvious in the animation. Its ment to be a pickup for a gritty survival horror game which is why it isn't like a glaringly obvious arcady pickup. This my 1st attempt at the low poly comp and im pretty pleased with it. I'll up the specular for my portfolio. great comp with some seriously cool models Beauty render: Beauty Animation (avi) http://www.nic.sarahparsons.co.uk/fo...althpickup.avi diffuse map wire frame normal map specular map alpha map