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Old 22-03-2009, 11:25 AM   #9 (permalink)
benclark
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it looks solid so far but for a portfolio piece theres nothing that makes me think wow

I think it needs something you can really go to town on texturing so this piece stands out


also the lighting seems very random like you have just cloned the light and moved it around without much planning. Why would there be 3 small single-bulb lights stuck on the top of a very high ceiling?

If this is an industrial scene then I would think industrial style lighting would look better.

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