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Old 07-24-2008, 01:37 PM   #13 (permalink)
Ghostscape
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I can give you a better breakdown later but right now the things that immediately stand out is that you're not paying attention to materials and you're abusing bevels without paying attention to component shapes. You have a groove going through that soft rectangle in the middle, which is destroying both of their shapes. You have the caution stripes on the bottom that do not deform or contour to the bevel on the bottom, and the caution stripes are solid colors that are scratched off, rather than looking like paint with multiple layers, actual surface texture, and degrees of wear and fading.
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