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Your site is okay, its not very visually appealing to me. To me a site should be fairly basic, yet obviously illustrate your understanding of design principles. Your art should speak for itself. The site should not distract from your work. I wouldnt have my videos load in the same window as my other art because the other aspects of the site can be distracting to the viewer. Giving them a much quicker chance to change to something else.
Other notes:
The dots have to go.
Your demo reel is too long. Keep it short no more than 45 seconds, and show your best stuff.
The kids running over and over again is too repetitive.
You cloth sim work is okay.
But you need more variety.
You have too much info in front of each segment, narrow it down. Not everyone is going to pause the video to read that and take the info down. Some, not all.
Good luck.
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