For such tights jeans he isnt sporting much of a package!,
also the neck looks slightly too stretched in my opinion like if he tried to look up he wouldnt be able to, also the adams apple seems alot long?
adams apple
best picture I could find to show my point,
apart from that I really like the style!
chris
p.s. he looks gaunt! thats the word I was looking for, not a crit just an observation but Im guessing you meant him to come out like that