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Thank you all very much for your crits so far!
Really love your feedback, it really helps me a lot.
UnsteadyTeddy: About the tyres: I guess the guys using that vehicle recently had to buy new wheels cause the old ones where way to fucked up to use them any longer. But poor workers just did what had to be done and didn't care about the rest of the truck. (-,
But anyway, I think you're right, the clean wheels might hardly fit into the whole idea of an heavily used car.
Fingermarks are actually integrated, but you not noticing them shows me I worked them out to weak.
Ghostscape: The intention of using the leaf-brushes was to tell a story; the car stood under a tree in autumn, leafs fell off, got wet and sticked on the roof. dust from the suburban surrounding continued to pile up on the roof. then once on some dry days they fell off and voila, leafstamps....
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