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myles · 12-09-2007, 02:50 PM

Hey!
I like the general look of the new website, although the download, 2007, 2008 links don't work. I guess that's because it's a preview. But really I can not comment on this portfolio unless you show how the gallery will look. Although I'm not too keen on everything being on the left side of the page, it makes it all look empty. Maybe try indenting the text?

I like a lot of you work there but I think you need to fill the render area a bit more. I suggest you get rid of finalitalyrender1.gif as how ever nice the textures are there are too many repetitive areas and generally isn't very nice too look at. Maybe try a clay render for these or something close to one as i guess your not using 3DS Max or Maya.

Defiantly keep these but please do nicer renders!

controlbeutyshot.jpg - outdoorclockbeutyshot.jpg - washroompropssheet.jpg - sweettoothsheet.jpg

Hope this helps!

Your texturing is great, its just the renders that let them down. Email me and ill see if there's anything i can do to help with those renders.

12-09-2007, 02:50 PM	#2 (permalink)
myles Teenage Artist 253 - 21	Hey! I like the general look of the new website, although the download, 2007, 2008 links don't work. I guess that's because it's a preview. But really I can not comment on this portfolio unless you show how the gallery will look. Although I'm not too keen on everything being on the left side of the page, it makes it all look empty. Maybe try indenting the text? I like a lot of you work there but I think you need to fill the render area a bit more. I suggest you get rid of finalitalyrender1.gif as how ever nice the textures are there are too many repetitive areas and generally isn't very nice too look at. Maybe try a clay render for these or something close to one as i guess your not using 3DS Max or Maya. Defiantly keep these but please do nicer renders! controlbeutyshot.jpg - outdoorclockbeutyshot.jpg - washroompropssheet.jpg - sweettoothsheet.jpg Hope this helps! Your texturing is great, its just the renders that let them down. Email me and ill see if there's anything i can do to help with those renders. __________________ > Portfolio > Support Constructive Criticism Error: The operation completed successfully.