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Technically I think it's pretty much fine, although the white base really isn't doing much for your presentation. I think your lack of comments probably stems from your subject choice; a brickworks is sort of boring, and if you took away a few of the small doodads it would just look like any other collection of brick buildings.
Aside from the white base I mentioned (I'd think about getting rid of it completely or at least changing it around), the block on the top right of the rightmost building looks weird. I dunno exactly what it is but I think if you wanted you could probably add even more soot/grime, like you have on the smokestack.
Finally, you haven't told us how many tris it's up to, but details like a worn footpath or a parked car/forklift or something would help to spice things up.
I like the carts/rails and the piles of stuff, plus and that smokestack thing.
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